Wednesday, 11 September 2019

Escape from Kraznir Part 2

Welcome back,
  It has been a couple of weeks since I showed you my Kraznir writing. I am now on chapter 3. In all the chapters we have to write a different part of the adventure, I am up to writing about crossing the lake so we can get back to Slinsil. These are all the characters I chose for my story. Touchfire a Wizard. Athor a tiny person. Lily Potter a kind and caring witch with no warts.


                        

Chapter 1
Three warriors have a mission to Kraznir, to steal the plans for the war that Kraznir has called upon the two lands. One of the three warriors is Lily the leader, she has an invisibility cloak and the most powerful wand in the world. Then there is Touchfire, he can make himself invisible and turn people into stone for 5 minutes. The third warrior is Arthor he is short but strong, and he always carries an axe that is the size of him. 

“Bang!” Went the dungeon door as it slammed shut. Borgin and Burkes! Mumbled Touchfire. “How are we supposed to get out and back to Slinsil”. Arthor whispered angrily. “Don’t forget we still have to look after this chest". Lily told them a bit louder than a whisper. As I sat down dust filled the air, rats scampering around the dimly lit dungeon. I looked up and saw a bloody handprint on the wall and shivered.

Hours passed by slowly and we were getting hungrier and hungrier. “Wait I have an idea”. yelled Arthor! “We can use this key I stole from the guard when he put us in  here” ! “ Why didn’t you tell us this days ago”. “I don’t know, I forgot.” Arthor said hoping for at least a good job. Lily looked inside of the chest to see if there was something to help us. Then next to the plans was a map of the whole castle. One hour later the key was still not working. Arthor are you sure that's the right key. Well he had two different keys and I just grabbed one. ARTHOR! Moaned  Touchfire well time for plan B. I will turn the bars into stone and Arthor you will hit it. “ With the axe not your head”! “Oh yes, Sorry”. 

Smash! Went the door, then rapidly fell apart. We all ran out. We ran down the corridor. “Turn Left”! Lily called, her voice echoed around the whole castle. “We have company”. Called Arthor. “Run into the wall on the right“! What! Have you gone mad”! called Arthor. “She’s mad? You're the one who spent an hour trying a key that was supposed to be for something else”. “Now!” Lily yelled as we run at the wall. We fell through and inside was the food cellar, now we will have food for the race home. Lily grabbed a bag and put fruit, bread  and cookies inside. 

After we had eaten I popped my head out, to make sure I didn't get seen I put my invisibility cloak over my head. Then we jumped out and started to run towards the secret tunnel. “We are nearly there!” shouted Arthor. Then he stops dead and looks into the room on the side to him.  His eyes lit up and he walked in and he saw were the guards slept. Arthor started to run but before he got two feet Lily grabbed his collar and pulled him back. There is a guard in there genius. Lily pulled her invisibility cloak over herself then walked in brought out her wand and pointed it at the guard and said “Stupefy” and the guard was immediately knocked out. “All clear” Lily called back to Touchfire and Arthor. They entered and immediately started jumping on the beds. I on the other hand went to see it any weapons could help us. I found fourteen little knives they will come in handy and I put them in my magic bag.  Come on you two stop messing around. We need to get out of here. After they gathered some weapons. 

We started to run  for the tunnel. We jumped in and hid, we crawled through the tunnel and found that the end was bored up. Athor can you make this way fall away. SMASH! The wooden boards fall away. And we climbed onto the steep legeg. I had not seen the sky for what felt like anaternaty. It was starting to get dark so Lily said we should sleep here tonight.



Chapter 2

Lily started to wake as the sun shone in my eyes. I woke up Athor and Touchfire and  told then we needed to get moving. I look around. “Do you two hear that”. We turned around and saw 20  Orcs running towards us there spears as sharper than knives. Me and Touchfire stepped forwards. I pointed my wand at a Orcs and yelled expelliarmus and  most of the Orc’s went flying. Touchfire put a shield of fire around as, the rest ran away with burnt body parts and some to scared. 

We eged along the narrow path being so careful not to make one wrong move. After what seemed like 5 hours (it was probably only 1 or 2 hours) we were on steep path I could see all the way to Slinsil.  Once we got to the path down the cliffs we started our long journey down the steep path.

 Athor took one step and face planted onto the rock path and started to roll down the steep path.  We chased Athor down the rocky path. OW AH! We heard Athor yell as he hit every bump. We chased after him.” Wingardium Leviosa”. Lily said. Imditly  Athor started to hover in mid air. “Coulded you have done that ages ago”. Athor Moaned. Sorry I forgot I could do mugic. Lily called to him. The rest of the way down it was pretty easy. 

Chapter 3

Arriving finally at the river, Touchfires powers glitch and then his magic was gone. What's wrong. Said Lily. I can’t use my powers around or in water. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!  Screams Athor. We turn around and see a cookie in and water and him sitting next to the eg then we hear a deafening sound and then rocks started to fall. Me, Athor and Touchfire hid in a hole in the mountain.  We walked out and looked around the mass of rock. Then I saw something gleamer I run towards it and it turns out to be a small boat. Come look what I found. Called Lily back to her friends. They came running what is I found a boat ut it looks like it can only hold 4 people. One to row another to steer and the bags should wegie just about the same as one person. So me and Athor will go with the bags and we come back for you. 

As we clapered into the boat touchfire fell off the boat as he was loading the food on and the river swallowed him howl. Me and Athor were stunned.  Come on I said Athor we can feel bad later we need to get going. We pushed the boat off the shores and Athor started to row and I started to steer. It all started calm and gentle until we got to about the middle and a storm started to roll in. “Roll faster we can’t get stuck in this storm”. 

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