Hi today I will be writing a short story for you also known as a quick write.
We are given the sentence starter and we have to carry it on.
As I walked, I wondered where on Earth I was, it was starting to get dark but I was not scared because I had already walked around this part of the woods. Then I saw a cottage. I had heard bad rumors about this cottage but it was the only plan I had so I walked in. I started relaxing on the bed when I heard a voice. The voice said "I got you where I what you, now I 'm gonna eat you. I looked around and saw nothing but it was not that loud so I started relaxing again. Then I heard it again but louder. "I got you where I want you know I'm gonna eat you." So I got up and looked around but saw nothing so I started to relax again but again the noise came louder than before, "I got you where I want you, now I'm going to eat you." So I got up and looked around but saw nothing. I was about to leave when I lent on the stuffed toy wolf's head and a secret passageway opened up into a little room and in that little room was a little stage behind the curtains was a.....
LITTLE MONKEY PICKING HIS NOSE AND HE SHOUTED I HAVE GOT YOU WHERE I WANT YOU NOW I AM GOING TO EAT YOU. Then it all made sense. He was talking about his booger and eating it, I feel silly.
Hello Poppy
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your story it was intriguing and very descriptive. At first I was scared for you but at the end I burst out laughing. Your story had so much humour it made me feel scared and happy. I also loved the language you used it gave your story so much structure.I can't even begin to put into words how much I love this story. Personally this story is right up my ally because it is the perfect amount of scary and humour. Keep up the phenomenal work Poppy I can not wait to read more of your story. Oh and just wondering are you going to post more Quick write stories in the future? I hope so :)
Hi Poppy, it's Summer your blogging buddy. I really like how creative your story is. This post reminds me about posting my quick write. I think that the 3rd to last sentence is a bit to long, so maybe you could add a comma. If this was actually happening too you how would you feel?
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