Monday, 25 June 2018

Indominus Rex chase

This is a quick write.

 A quick write  is a sent starter that the teacher puts on the board like for example: 

Thump... Thump... Thump... My heart pounded inside my chest as I...

Then what we do is we carry on with the story like my one and that is what a quick write is.

Thump... Thump...Thump my heart pounded inside my chest as I ran for my life. The one and only Indominus Rex the smartest and deadliest dinosaur chasing me. I dived under a jurassic park vehicle. With my knife cutting the petrol pipe in the car.  Petrol splashed all over my body. Now the Indominus Rex would not what to eat me. Then I saw his mammoth eye staring at me. The bloodthirsty dinosaur with his mouth open. Teeth the size of my leg that that is all that I could think about at that moment. Then when I thought I  was a goner he smelt the petrol. Poked out his tongue and run away.    



This is one of my Favorites quick writes and I hope that you like like it two.

 

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